Friday 13 December 2019

Narrative story/writing

LI:To write a story
I am a Narrative. A Narrative is a story. Step one to make a plan. Step two is to change the plan into sentences.   
This Narrative is a Work in progress.

Title

Dundid chip

Orientation

awawawaw“I’m going to die!” scream the useless crew. Captain cinderella said “help me and grab a bucket!”
  • A navy ship was sinking. 
  • Their are wave coming again and again

Problem

One of the crew members were playing around and created a big hole in the ship. There was a hole in the hull. 
It happened because one of the useless crew kick the ball and it when the wrong way and it made the hull break.  

Events

Captain cinderella fixed the hull by using things that were made out of wood.

Solution

They grab buckets and follow my lead useless crew

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